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Hi Mark,
ReplyDeleteI like how you made this eye catching so you can draw people in.
This reminds me of reading a book about volcanoes. This also reminds me of learning how volcanoes work.
Next you should add more information. Because it looks unfinished in a way. Also make the words bigger.
By Mika
Yaldhurst Model School
Link to blog http://ymsmika.blogspot.co.nz/